The phrase "as a better version of" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when comparing two things, indicating that one is an improved or enhanced form of the other.
Example: "This new software functions as a better version of the previous model, offering more features and improved performance."
Alternatives: "as an improved version of" or "as a superior version of".
It must be received as a better version of an earlier explanation or fill a void that, for whatever reason, no version has yet filled.
Like Emma, my ultimate goal will be to graduate from college as a better version of myself.
There were plenty of times I had looked at my son Zach as a better version of me, man-wise.
"To be reborn as a better version of oneself-the project encapsulates a powerful symbolic metaphor," its founders state.
However, he felt that the episode served as a better version of "The Hand of St. Sebastian", with the slower pace of a two-part episode allowing for greater "gravitas" to be given to the storyline.
And sure, Titanic may be corny, clumsy, and obvious but the sincerity of its emotions and the power of its spectacle endure, particularly when both elements come together in the majestic closing images: a dream vision in which the ship is brought back from its watery grave not just to its former glory, but as a better version of itself.
It's better if people see your edited story as a good new story, as opposed to a better version of a bad story.
Possibly, maybe even likely at first, but eventually it's feasible that a competitor would have used their work as the basis for a better version of Windows.
A minority woman in the predominantly white male world of tech, she celebrates her failures and sees them as opportunities to become a better version of herself.
Many of us will hang on to our original colour (or a better version of it) for as long as we can but, as The TV Presenter and The Actor have so kindly illustrated, it's not without its pitfalls.
It feels as if Atlético are simply a better version of Leicester, and the Foxes' Champions League dream will surely come to an end against a team who pointed the way for their astonishing success.
