The phrase "argument that it made" is not correct in standard written English.
It seems to be an incomplete or awkward construction that lacks clarity.
Example: "The argument that it made was compelling and well-structured."
Alternatives: "the argument it presented" or "the case it made".
The argument, he explained, was that "it made our company look bad to be associating with Jeremiahs saying that the models were all wrong".
The concern over marketing based on doctor-specific prescription records revolves around the argument that it makes commercial use of private health treatment decisions — initiated in nonpublic consultations between doctor and patient, and completed in government-regulated transactions with pharmacists.
In a conversation on "Fixing the Food Supply Chain," led by Sam Sifton, food editor of The New York Times, Ms. Suh and Walter Robb, a former chief executive of Whole Foods Markets, made the argument that it makes moral, social and economic sense to ensure equitable access to fresh food in communities throughout the United States.
On the other hand, there's an argument that it makes no sense for same-sex relationships to remain taboo for superhero movies in 2016 when the highest-grossing children's film franchise of all-time, Harry Potter, achieved some its best box office results following JK Rowling's 2007 revelation that Hogwarts headmaster Dumbledore was gay.
As for the argument that it makes teenage girls want to wax - that view is a little bit outdated.
At a high level, there's an argument that it makes the Valley's greater ecosystem more mercenary and one that it makes it less mercenary.
The Russians seemed to be swayed by the arguments that it made little sense that the opposition, which is heavily Sunni Muslim, or even extremist jihadist elements, would kill so many of their own faith in cold blood, said one Security Council diplomat, speaking anonymously about a closed-door session.
The general argument is that it made sense to outlaw war in 1928 because war had previously been deemed a legitimate instrument of national policy.
His argument was that it made more sense to donate money for health, education and sanitation projects than to burden poor countries with debt.
The problem with that argument is that it makes commercial internet enterprises the under-regulated custodian of our most intimate intentions and secrets.
