The phrase "are revised based on" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing changes or updates that are made according to specific criteria or information.
Example: "The project guidelines are revised based on the feedback received from the stakeholders."
Alternatives: "are updated according to" or "are modified in light of".
We will further estimate the years lived with disability to derive cancer burden in DALYs once weights assigned to disabling conditions are revised based on the estimates from the on-going population-based surveys from more than 70 countries [ 21].
Both BNs are revised based on incremental learning [49].
The news BNs are revised based on parameter learning [49] in super peers.
In Section 3, the divergence theorem of the triangular integral and a related corollary in the 3D space are revised based on the appropriate increments of the double sequence.
In Section 4, the divergence theorem of the triangular integral and a related corollary in the 4D time-space are revised based on the appropriate increments of the triple sequence.
The locations of plastic hinges in the failure mechanism of top- and seat-angle connections assumed by three-parameter power model (Kishi and Chen 1990) are revised based on the deformation patterns of the connections reproduced by FE analyses (Ahmed et al. 2001; Ahmed 2002; Pirmoz et al. 2009) and experiments (Azizinamini et al. 1985; Harper 1990).
The questionnaire was pilot tested in two different groups of primary care providers and preventive medicine residents at one of the study sites and was revised based on their feedback.
The module will be revised based on the test run and is set for full implementation next school year.
The documents will be discussed in public hearings next week and may be revised based on feedback there and in other forums, said Anita F. Contini, the development corporation official who is overseeing the memorial process.
Even though the piece was to be revised based on editors' subsequent conversations with Captain Carter, the initial reaction by the editor who chose this language as the going-in position is indicative of both the inherent bias of this individual editor as well as (I fear) The Times's editorial staff.
