The phrase "approval of a revised" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing the acceptance or endorsement of a modified document, plan, or proposal.
Example: "The committee will meet next week to discuss the approval of a revised budget proposal."
Alternatives: "endorsement of a modified" or "acceptance of an updated".
He said he was hoping for rapid approval of a revised proposal that would make demolition of buildings 75 years old or older subject to the city Landmarks Preservation Board's review.
The FDA rejected the application, and delayed approval of a revised application until August 2006.
The Bush administration is virtually assured of gaining Security Council approval of a revised United Nations resolution on Iraq's future, diplomats said, but it remains unclear whether the measure will be adopted overwhelmingly or in a less convincing, abstention-riddled vote.
The European Parliament eventually gave its approval to a revised agreement in July 2010.
The European Parliament gave its approval to a revised agreement last July.
The Parliament eventually gave its approval to a revised agreement in July 2010.
A letter signed by 44 Republicans and 9 Democrats said the approval by Nebraska's governor, Dave Heineman, of a revised route through his state put the long-delayed project squarely in the president's hands.
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"The approval of our Revised Chukchi Sea Exploration Plan is an important milestone and signals the confidence regulators have in our plan," said Shell spokesman Curtis Smith.
"With today's approval of the revised economic programme, the country has taken an important step forward along the necessary path of fiscal consolidation and growth-enhancing structural reform," they said in a statement.
Michael Wines (NYT) RUSSIA: NEW ANTHEM LYRICS -- The poet who co-wrote the lyrics to the Soviet national anthem, officially adopted this week as Russia's national song, has won tentative approval of revised lyrics lacking the original's effusive praise of Stalin and Communism.
