The phrase "annotated version of the" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to a version of a document, text, or work that includes notes, comments, or explanations to provide additional context or information.
Example: "The annotated version of the manuscript includes detailed explanations of the author's choices and historical references."
Alternatives: "commented edition of the" or "explanatory version of the".
There have been many diagnoses bandied about among fans and scholars, says Leslie Klinger, the editor of the most comprehensive annotated version of the Sherlock Holmes stories.
It has done so with the utmost care, handing to academics the job of reproducing a heavily annotated version of the book, which has won plaudits for the tone of the scholarship.
A new Italian "Ulysses" is due later in the year, and Sam Slote is preparing a heavily annotated version of the novel for publication, a reprint of a text that came out in Joyce's lifetime.
What it motivated me to do – and not just me, but my fact checker and the editor – was to publish this fully annotated version of the piece within a couple of days, in which we footnoted every fact with a paper.
2. This treatise was published in English translations in 1736 and 1737, the latter under the title, "A Treatise of the Method of Fluxions and Infinite Series, With its Application to the Geometry of Curve Lines" (reprinted in [W, I, 27-137]; see also [M, III, 32-372] for a fully annotated version of the Latin text with translation).
We used the UML Loader to insert components from a semantically annotated version of the model shown in Figure 1 into the caDSR.
So it includes practical advice and annotated versions of the author's greatest hits.
His ferociously annotated versions of the Pentateuch and of the Psalms chaperone the Hebrew-less reader through many dense cruxes.
Ambinder published a critical "annotated" version of Palin's piece, noting at the onset, "Once again, the Washington Post has given Sarah Palin the chance to harness herself to the political story of the hour".
"I'm no cineaste," Nabokov once told Alfred Appel, who edited the extraordinary annotated version of "Lolita".
The Guardian has posted an annotated version of Mr. Goodman's letter on its Web site.
