The phrase "and when he noted" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used to indicate a moment when someone observed or acknowledged something, often leading to a subsequent action or thought.
Example: "He was surprised by the sudden change in temperature, and when he noted the time, he realized it was already late."
Alternatives: "and upon noticing" or "and as he observed".
Rodriguez mentioned how the Mets were his first choice and chuckled when he noted they were not in first.
Three years later in 1996, he claimed to have listened to Carey's album Music Box and was shocked when he noted the song's similar lyrics.
This fact was identified by Romano Prodi, a former President of the European Commission and Prime Minister of Italy when he noted in "Il Messaggero" that each movement found an idea that could resonate with many citizens regardless of their original political leaning.
Yonekazu Satoda was confined at an assembly center in Fresno awaiting transfer to the Jerome Relocation Center, a swampy and barren internment camp in Arkansas, when he noted a missed milestone in his diary.
Mr. Wan, the minister of science and technology, raised another concern Friday when he noted that the industry had to look at safety as it sought to make electric cars ever lighter.
Dag Kitlaus, co-founder of Siri and now Viv.ai, said it best when he noted that AI-powered digital assistants will disrupt the era of the Search Engine and see the dawn of the 'Do Engine'.
He rarely mentions President Bush, as he disparages the partisan quarrels of Washington, and is, at most, elliptically critical of Mr. Edwards and Mrs. Clinton when he notes that he had opposed the war in Iraq from the start; the two of them voted to authorize the war in 2002.
Strip away the club allegiance and Guardiola makes a worthwhile point when he notes that Messi has reached five yellows and therefore a suspension (three handballs, one protest and one dive) at the same time as Pepe.
At times, he stretches the analogies between basketball and politics a bit far, as when he notes that "a functional pickup game needs a quorum of players who can metaphorically, as Obama did literally, carry both Indiana and Vermont," or suggests that Obama's playing style might be described, like his foreign policy, as "leading from behind".
And when he writes notes to himself, he writes in English.
