The phrase "and the preliminary draft" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to an initial version of a document or project that is still in the early stages of development.
Example: "We have completed the initial review, and the preliminary draft is ready for feedback."
Alternatives: "and the initial draft" or "along with the draft version".
Based on the clinical challenge, the final list of sign and symptom items was generated, and the preliminary draft of the WRSSM measure was developed.
The Records also include correspondence concerning Committee administrative matters, publication, and business arrangements, comments on Common Cause and the preliminary draft of the Constitution, and miscellaneous manuscript materials.
LS reviewed the literature, analyzed the data and wrote the preliminary draft and RS conceived, designed and coordinated the study and edited the draft into the final version.
AG and EM gathered the data and revised the preliminary draft of the manuscript.
CP contributed to the design and management of the study, analysis of the results and prepared the preliminary draft of the manuscript.
SZ carried out the microbial transformation experiments, purified all the metabolites, interpreted the spectroscopic data and prepared the preliminary draft of the manuscript.
Using representative T2R and V1R amino acid sequences from mouse, Xenopus tropicalis and zebrafish as queries, we searched with tblastn for t2r and v1r genes in the preliminary draft of the Latimeria chalumnae genome produced by the Broad Institute [ 21].
In addition to lending its support to U.S. measures such as the Proliferation Security Initiative (PSI) and UN Resolution 1540 (the preliminary draft of which was produced through Franco-American cooperation), the EU has also launched parallel initiatives such as the Chemical-Biological-Radiological-Nuclear (CBRN) Risk Mitigation Centres of Excellence.
The first of these (known in German as the Gesamtentwurf and in English as either the Preliminary Draft or the First Complete Draft) was made in pencil on three staves, one for the voices and two for the instruments.
The pre-publication history for this paper can be accessed here: http://www.biomedcentral.com/1472-6920/13/158/prepub The authors wish to thank Dr. Munekazu Naito, for his comments on the preliminary draft and Ms. Akemi Mitsuya, for the excellent secretarial assistance.
I am especially grateful to Daniel Rothschild for catching an error and for suggesting the repair in the preliminary draft of section 2. The entry relies at many places on Szabó, 2000a,.
