The phrase "and revised this" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when indicating that something has been modified or updated, typically in the context of documents or written work.
Example: "I reviewed the report and revised this section to improve clarity."
Alternatives: "and updated this" or "and edited this".
YB and JX: substantial contributions to research conception and study design; JX: acquisition of data, drafting the manuscript; Y-HL and L-HB: analysis and interpretation of data; J-D W: critically read and revised this manuscript with important intellectual content; YB and SL: Study design and discussion of revision of this manuscript.
Created for the Royal Ballet in 1984 and revised, this "Nutcracker" was recorded onstage last December at the Royal Opera House at Covent Garden.
A team of authors with a wealth of diverse teaching and clinical experience has updated and revised this new edition to efficiently cover what you're learning in contemporary anatomy classes.
YZ wrote this paper and analyzed the results of the experiments; JW proposed the initial idea and revised this manuscript; QS carried out the simulations and revised this manuscript; WG conceived of the experiments.
In 1984, BLM set the maximum carrying capacity of the Pryor Mountains Wild Horse Range at 121 adult animals, and revised this to 95 adult animals in 1992.
DV individually drafted and revised this manuscript.
(I may come back and revise this sentence in a week's time).
M.W., S.P.D. and E.P.G. contributed equally to development, writing and revising this Review.
John Rickford of the linguistics department has the most amazing time management plans: he would detail everything about writing this chapter, and revising this one, while writing that one, and revising this one.
All authors participated in drafting and revising this paper.
The goal of reviewing and revising this rule for new supersonic aircraft technology is to allow flight testing as part of research, development and the type-certification process.
