The phrase "and offering a revised" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing the act of providing an updated or modified version of something, such as a document, proposal, or plan.
Example: "The committee reviewed the initial proposal and offering a revised version that addressed the concerns raised during the meeting."
Alternatives: "and presenting an updated" or "and providing a modified".
PNG's prime minister, Peter O'Neill, last month told his Australian counterpart, Tony Abbott, that Port Moresby would be tearing up the existing resettlement agreement, signed in July 2013 by Kevin Rudd, and offering a revised one for cabinet to sign off on.
For the most part, this involves communicating with the community of backers to explain what happened and why, documenting how the funds were used up or how they'll be put to use to complete the project in alternate form, and offering a revised timeline.
While not offering a revised schedule for vaccinating all military personnel, officials today restated their intent to complete the program.
If fully adopted, the rules will allow fish stocks to "recover by 2020, enabling us to take 15 million tons more fish and create 37,000 new jobs," predicted Ulrike Rodust, a German member of the Parliament who was responsible for revising and offering a legislative proposal originally developed by the European Commission in July 2011.
Google's Nexus 7 kickstarted the trend towards more affordable tablets, revised this year costing less than £200 and offering an experience comparable to the smaller of the two iPads.
"On Friday, the daily deals giant published the expected price range of its initial offering in a revised prospectus.
Now, in some cars that became available this month, the company is offering a new system with a revised interface that is easier to use and may be ready to shed its image as a symbol of technology run amok.
Brent Long poked his head in and delivered a revised forecast.
Chrysler has revised its PT Cruiser, offering a PT Turbo; its Neon now comes in a hot SRT/4 package, sharing the same engine as the PT Turbo; and the Viper was also significantly altered.
THE prospectus for Bradford & Bingley's original rights issue is not all that was pulped after the bank announced the terms of a revised offering on June 2nd.
For many, it really is about finding a solution to the old conundrum: how do you create a chamber of people who will be independent-minded and bring together the diverse expertise that makes a second chamber effective in revising legislation and offering something distinctive from the Commons?
