Sentence examples for an edited draft from inspiring English sources

Contains an edited draft of Cronache dall'isola dei diavoli rossi, Stryker's unpublished Italian manuscript account and analysis of Cuban politics and society based on her time there; it became the basis for When the revolution was young, published in 2004.

But the references in the draft to higher rates of searches and use of force for blacks and Hispanics were crossed out by hand, with a notation in the margin that read, "Do we need this?" A note affixed to the edited draft, which the officials said was written by Ms. Henke, read "Make the changes," and it was signed "Tracy".

Read your edited draft out loud to yourself and anything that causes a hesitation should be corrected.

Includes edited draft of "Vance Avenue Choice Neighborhood Documentation Activity" for the "Vance Avenue Choice Neighborhood Planning Grant" Includes meeting agendas and notes, program schedules and reports, logos and other materials such as proposed schope of service, planning grant documents, PowerPoint report of activity, etc.

BVB made substantial contributions to the data analysis, interpretation, edited draft versions of this manuscript and the version to be submitted.

Once the edited draft has been accepted by the Working Group Chair it is released for public comment to the HVP Consortium as an Exposure Draft via the HVP website.

LAB advised on the framework for assessment and edited drafts of the manuscript.

DO helped with the analysis and edited drafts of the manuscript.

PT led the field research in India and edited drafts of the paper.

SRH advised on the study protocol and edited drafts of the manuscript.

All authors interpreted results, edited drafts of the manuscript and electronic Codac system, and read and approved the final manuscript.