The phrase "an altered version of" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to a modified or changed form of something, such as a text, image, or piece of music.
Example: "The film is an altered version of the original novel, featuring new characters and plot twists."
Alternatives: "a modified version of" or "a revised version of".
Originally, the studio was hesitant to feature an altered version of the fanfare, but allowed the alteration after being convinced by de Bont and hearing it performed by an orchestra.
The exhibition is an altered version of a show put on a year ago -- about half the photographs and some of the sculptures have been changed.
Damaged versions of the gene produced an altered version of the protein that was less effective in recognizing invading bacteria, they said.
But Mr. Ludwig has found a suitable place for an altered version of its concluding episode, in which the boys return to witness their own funeral.
In the piece, a series of photographs of their mother throughout her life covers a wall and underneath is an altered version of the slogan "Heaven and earth are great but greater still is the kindness of the party".
Denzel Washington, in an altered version of the Walter Matthau role, plays a Metropolitan Transportation Authority stalwart who has been demoted to dispatcher pending an investigation into accusations of bribe taking.
That is because we cannot be certain about the repeatability of feature points (that is, the probability that a specific point will be extracted in any altered version of the image).
The conductor Christian Curnyn, conducting a somewhat altered version of the 1754 score, sets well-judged tempos but could have worked harder to attain from the E.N.O.'s modern-instrument orchestra a performance with the litheness and crispness of a period instrument band.
The Adolescent Health and Development in Context study in Ohio incorporates a somewhat altered version of the PADS + Space-Time Budgets.
They testified that they never felt intimidated by him, she maintained, and that the monetary gifts they received were not intended as a quid pro quo for their altered version of events.
As an accomplished writer himself, what would Dr. King have thought about the new altered version of Mark Twain's "Adventures of Huckleberry Finn," with racial attitudes of the mid-19th century sanitized by replacing the English language's most despised antiblack slur with the word "slave"?
