The phrase "amended discussion" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to a discussion that has been modified or revised in some way.
Example: "After reviewing the feedback, we held an amended discussion to address the concerns raised by the team."
Alternatives: "revised discussion" or "updated discussion".
There are several places in the discussion where such useful additional information can be readily provided; We have amended this discussion and now list the specific folds to which we refer when making these statements.
We have now further amended our discussion on nuclear volume changes to better emphasize this point.
We have amended our Discussion to include these important points, highlighted in yellow.
All comments were taken into consideration and the questionnaire was amended following discussion with the research team.
We have amended the Discussion to acknowledge this point: "We note, however, that our analysis does not test the possibility is that a third (unobserved) variable could jointly affect both regions, doing so differentially on effort vs. delay trials".
This assessment should be amended by discussion with the relevant stakeholders, which requires extensive risk communication and could form part of the multicriteria decision analysis (MCDA) approach discussed in detail below.
" We have amended the Discussion as follows: "Our proteomics analysis also identified other potential binding partners of PPP1R15. the evidence at hand suggesting actin's relevance to the core activity of the eIF2α-directed phosphatase justifies the focus on actin".
A detailed interview guide was prepared initially by MJH and LdB, and then amended following discussions with the rest of the research team.
We have amended the Results, Discussion, and Materials and methods sections accordingly and added a sentence to the discussion stating that it would be ideal to combine optogenetic tools with a fluorescent cAMP biosensor to study cAMP dynamics in live cells.
This was used as the guideline during the inception phase, but was presented and amended slightly after discussion with partners at the Inception meeting, principally due to the time limitations (described below under point 2.8).
