The phrase "amend this draft" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when requesting changes or revisions to a written document or proposal.
Example: "Please review the feedback and amend this draft accordingly before the final submission."
Alternatives: "revise this draft" or "modify this draft".
But the Pashtuns, rallied by President Hamid Karzai and his administration in recent months, have largely rejected Tajik efforts to amend the draft constitution.
Earlier this month the Parliament agreed to amend the draft law to make it harder for authorities to gain access to data.
At a minimum, Afghan leaders should amend the draft constitution to specifically ensure the human rights guarantees that Afghanistan has already accepted and ratified in six international treaties.
Consumer group Which? is unhappy with the U.K. data protection bill and has called on the government to amend the draft legislation to allow third-party organizations to seek collective redress for data breaches on behalf of consumers.
But conservatives amended that draft in subcommittee today to say that the role of the federal government in education "must be progressively limited," and were clearly resistant to much of the detailed education agenda put forward by the Texas governor.
Creationists on the board "amended and amended and amended" the draft standards until "they got what they wanted," Eugenie Scott of the National Center for Science Education told ScienceInsider.
Hadi agreed on Wednesday to political concessions, including amending the draft constitution, in a deal stipulating that the Houthi fighters would release Mubarak and relinquish their hold on Hadi's private residence, the presidential palace, and other sites — but the rebels did not withdraw, leading some to wonder if a coup was underway.
As this was totally unacceptable to the unitarists, this draft was subsequently amended into its opposite, by a compromise that finally formed a basis for a new Constitution.
Mr President, Commissioner, ladies and gentlemen, this draft Directive seeks to amend for the twenty-fifth time Council Directive 76/769/EEC relating to restrictions on the marketing and use of certain dangerous substances and preparations.
