The phrase "although this illustrates" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used to introduce a contrasting point or to acknowledge a situation while presenting an alternative perspective or conclusion.
Example: "Although this illustrates the importance of teamwork, it does not negate the value of individual contributions."
Alternatives: "even though this demonstrates" or "while this shows".
Although this illustrates her model well, showing how money can function as socially integrating or socially disintegrating, I would have enjoyed further discussion of how these functions overlap, particularly in the latter two chapters.
Although this illustrates that the cellular cytoskeleton is a compound material of actin, MTs and IFs, the key cytoskeletal biopolymers have largely been studied individually in the past.
This illustrates that although the authorities of a domain may think their DNS is secured, it is in fact not.
This illustrates that although anionic, C4Cn detergents may promote membrane protein crystallization.
This illustrates that although the known families capture the majority of the homology relationships, there are many additional relationships that are only captured by the ad-hoc families.
This illustrates that, although they too did eventually clonally exhaust in culture, they were relatively more robust than the unipotent CFU-Fs.
This illustrates that, although USA300 MRSA infections emerged in drug users, this epidemic is now spreading to other populations.
This illustrates that, although there are tissue specific differences in the ethylene metabolism, the developmental cues of fruit ripening are programmed in each tissue.
This illustrates that although the ILE definition is somewhat arbitrary, it does have value in defining a population at risk for progressive illness.
This illustrates that although there are regional differences in CVD early in adult life [ 11], as supported by analysis of CVD prevalence at baseline in the BWHHS [ 11], there is little further divergence in later life.
This illustrates that although fall-related self-efficacy and activity avoidance are related, they are not interchangeable constructs, and scale selection should be based on the objectives at hand.
