The phrase "altered version in" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to a modified or changed form of something, typically followed by a specific context or medium.
Example: "The altered version in the latest update includes several new features that enhance user experience."
Alternatives: "modified version in" or "revised edition in".
Elif Batuman's week of blogging on The Book Bench about "The Possessed," and her piece "The Ice Resistance," which appeared in an altered version in the book (subscription required).
The Post said in a statement that the reporter had accessed its system and replaced the editor-approved article with an altered version in which Ma's reference to Tiananmen was removed.
The Post said in a statement on its web site dated Saturday that the reporter had accessed its system and replaced the editor-approved article with an altered version in which Ma's reference to Tiananmen was removed without authorization.
For the 1847 Milan production, however, changes and misreadings generated an altered version in Italian the version commonly known today and Donizetti's failing health prevented his involvement then or later.
It became a highly demanded import title, which led to the release of an altered version of the game in the West Elite Beat Agents and a sequel in Japan.
In Mortal Kombat vs. DC Universe, he sported a slightly altered version of his third costume, in addition to a championship belt adorned with the Mortal Kombat dragon emblem.
On Tuesday, the band filed a counterclaim lawsuit against the Oakland-based toy company for using an altered version of the 1987 song in a video released on YouTube.
Lester's design is a slightly altered version of Bart's design in The Tracey Ullman Show and is voiced by Tress MacNeille, who normally voices Bart on temporary tracks.
Rumors circulated online that the Snap was Photoshopped; Chi Omega spokeswoman Whitney Plumpton told The Huffington Post the image being passed around (visible below) is "not the original Snapchat image," although the original did contain the slur used in the altered version.
Essentially, you have both a solid-state flash drive and a traditional hard drive in the machine, and software found in a slightly altered version of OS X Mountain Lion determines what data should go where automatically (based on your usage).
I've seen it twice, untitled at Cannes and now in this negligibly altered version, and I can attest that the titles don't undermine the film.
