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The phrase "alteration including a" is not correct and lacks clarity in written English.
It may be used when discussing changes or modifications that encompass a specific element, but it requires additional context to be meaningful.
Example: "The alteration including a new design element significantly improved the overall aesthetic of the project."
Alternatives: "modification that includes a" or "change involving a".
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Furthermore, below 960 m the basalt core shows obvious signs of alteration, including a distinct color change, the formation of smectite clay, and the presence of secondary minerals filling vesicles and fracture zones.
Some adult studies have not found associations between PFAA exposures and thyroid level alteration, including a study of Canadian pregnant women with hypothyroxinemia (n = 96; PFOA and PFOS medians = 3.9 and 15.5 nmol/L) whose serum PFAA concentrations were comparable to matched controls (n = 175; PFOA and PFOS medians = 3.6 and 16.4 nmol/L) (Chan et al. 2011).
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There were many nucleotide polymorphisms in the 5′ upstream region; six single-base substitutions, three single-base indels, two two-base indels and a three-base alteration including an indel.
Habitat alteration included: (a) erection of a 3.0 m high stone wall around the entire camp area; (b) removal of ≥30 cm of the upper earth layer throughout the site; (c) soil compaction and stone paving to a depth of ≥30 cm plus compaction of the surrounding area to a distance of 100 m outside the camp wall; and (d) regular eradication of vegetation.
His habit of approaching unsuspecting subjects has led to altercations, including a few that turned physical.
But lately, she has seen many alterations, including a controversial proposal by Lewis Futterman, a developer, to build a six-story apartment building with a penthouse at Manhattan Avenue and 106th Street.
He has since been linked to a series of altercations, including a punch-up with Frank Ocean, a brawl with Drake, and the alleged theft of a fan's iPhone.
Some changes, however, still loom: a 60,000-square-foot courtyard is planned as an event space for artists, and other alterations, including a riverside walkway, are in the works.
But it's essentially the same as the one that crashed, with a few minor alterations, including a safety lock to prevent the premature initiation of the feathering system that led to the crash.
Brain death (BD) causes hemodynamic and neuroendocrine alterations including a catecholamine surge, which in turn causes histologic lesions in cardiac muscle such as contraction bands, focal mononuclear cell infiltrates and cardiomyocyte necrosis.
These include API additions, such as the strlcat and strlcpy functions; toolchain alterations, including a static bounds checker; memory protection techniques to guard against invalid accesses, such as ProPolice and the W^X (W xor X) page protection feature; and cryptography and randomization features.
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