The phrase "all that commotion" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used to refer to a lot of noise, activity, or disturbance happening in a particular situation.
Example: "I couldn't concentrate on my work with all that commotion going on outside the window."
Alternatives: "all that noise" or "all that fuss".
"I didn't see him crying or all that commotion," says Wright of Gascoigne.
Amid all that commotion, you may have missed the biggest development of the season so far, that being the Pirates not completely stinking.
It appeals to an audience's fascination with watching objects manipulated by hand in the same space they occupy, and simultaneously to their compulsion to watch the onscreen presentation of all that commotion.
Like, "Did aliens invade New York last week, or was all that commotion from evil Spider-Man dancing down the street?
Of course, despite all that commotion, it's inevitable that migrant workers will be employed in the construction of the Kingdom Tower.
Every prisoner in Brazil says he is tortured...it's a victim culture...like in the US, and all that commotion over Guantanamo," he argued, thumping his fist on the desk for emphasis.
And how does all that molecular commotion end up putting the buzz in a bee's bonnet?
AT&T has pulled back the curtains on a fleet of five new Android-powered smartphones that should hit wireless retailers just in time for all that holiday commotion.
In a city whose cacophony can reach 95 decibels in Midtown Manhattan — way above the federal government's recommended average of no more than 70 decibels — the commotion over all that racket involves irate residents, anti-noise advocates, bars, helicopter sightseeing companies, landscapers and construction companies, as well as City Hall.
Even so, I found the scene a little implausibly long, such that all the commotion lent itself to a kind of inertia, as I mentioned above.
