The phrase "again when she was" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to a repeated action or event that occurred during a specific time in the past related to a female subject.
Example: "She smiled again when she was reminded of the happy memories from her childhood."
Alternatives: "once more when she was" or "again at the time she was".
ALEXIA HAMMOND first came into care at the age of five and then again when she was a teenager.
Ms. Robinson has said that Mr. Savile abused her again when she was 15, but that no one confronted him.
She was cheered once again when she was substituted out of the match in the 59th minute.
The actress Brenda Fricker, meanwhile, watched Jailhouse Rock six times – again, when she was a teenager and she was "discovering sex".
Though she does not recall it, the impact fractured her skull, which was fractured again when she was knocked to the pavement.
And there she was again when she was accused, wrongly, Downing Street insisted, of trying to enhance Blair's role during the Queen Mother's funeral.
… I'll see her again when she's in next week.
Albertine Simonet and Marcel (Proust gives no surname to the character) meet at Balbec, a seaside resort, when she is a young girl and then again when she is a sophisticated young woman.
Working as a waitress, she's spotted by a photographer, and her life changes — and then changes again when she's stalked by a concert violinist (Rudolf Nureyev) with a sideline in terrorist-hunting, for which he recruits her.
After drugs help and then hurt her career at Condé Nast, Marnell's addiction allows her to rise again when she is tapped to be the "unhealthy health editor" at xoJane, Jane Pratt's women's Web site.
'But if you look you soon realise that it is full of regulars who go there every week or every day.' She recognises faces every time she goes in, she says, and she expects to do so again when she's there next month.
