The phrase "advice on revisions" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when seeking guidance or suggestions for making changes or improvements to a document, project, or piece of work.
Example: "I would appreciate your advice on revisions to my thesis before I submit it."
Alternatives: "guidance on edits" or "suggestions for changes".
ZH re-drafted parts of the manuscript and provided helpful advice on the final revision.
PVP performed the Western blot analysis and gave advice on manuscript preparation and revision.
The latest edition of the American Medical Association (AMA) style manual offers no advice on writing or text revision but contains an abundance of rules on specific points of grammar, usage and technical style [ 17].
Thanks goes to Dr. Sebastian Sethe for advice on data interpretation and manuscript revision.
The London meeting also considered the key issues to be addressed when the Codex parent organisations FAO and WHO, in collaboration with OIE, will provide scientific advice on AMR to support the revision of the 2005 Codex code of practice.
ST was responsible for the study's design and advice on epidemiological methods, data interpretation, critical revisions of the manuscript for important intellectual content, FL contributed to the conception and design of the study, analysis and interpretation of data, critical revisions of the manuscript for important intellectual content, and clinical diagnostic expertise for the study.
As learners engaged in FFPR, they sought and provided suggestions or advice on a particular point of text revision, elicited and provided opinions or evaluation (Mendonca & Johnson, 1994; Mendonca & Johnson, 1994; Lockhart & Ng, 1995; Zhu, 1995; Villamil & De Guerrero, 1996; De Guerrero & Villamil, 2000; Hanjani & Li, 2014) and exchanged information (McGroarty & Zhu, 1997).
In an interview to promote it, Mankiewicz said, "Greene's book made me so mad, I was determined to make a picture of it" (qtd. in Weales 492-93).1 Some time in early 1956 he contacted Colonel Edward Lansdale, USAF, for advice on the plausibility of his intended revision.
DVC provided advice on experimental design and provided comment and revisions to the manuscript.
PS, RF, SSS, MD, and SS were involved in the conception and design of the study and the data analysis strategy, provided advice on data interpretation, and contributed to the revisions of the manuscript.
