The phrase "advice improvements" is not correct in written English.
It seems to be a mix-up of terms; "advice" is a noun, while "improvements" is also a noun, and they do not naturally combine in this way. An example of a correct usage could be: "I would like to receive advice on improvements to my project."
Alternatives: "suggestions for enhancements" or "recommendations for upgrades."
Public health responses require a range of actions, including timely public health and medical advice, improvements to housing and urban planning, early warning systems, and the assurance that health care and social systems are ready to act.
Strategies require a range of actions, including timely public health and medical advice, improvements to housing and urban planning, early warning systems, and assurance that health care and social systems are ready to act.
An independent panel governing standards of forensic experts found Patel needed advice on improvements to his work in three cases and no action needed to be taken in the fourth.
Ofgem and British Gas,which cited bad weather as one of the reasons for the delay, said the £11.1m penalty would be used to help vulnerable customers through energy-efficiency advice and improvements.
The review investigates the practice of effect size reporting, summarizes standardized effect sizes detected in the experiments, discusses the results and gives advice for improvements.
Subsequently, these reports are analysed by the committee and, if necessary, the committee gives advice for improvements that should prevent recurrence of the incident.
They went and complained to another member of staff, but I wasn't trying to offend, merely to offer advice for improvement.
Students will receive complex and thorough assessment of their work, advice for improvement and editing notes, and a detailed plan for finishing their projects and future writing.
Tania Urban, a mother of four and the designer of contemporary children's bedding company Ella & Otto ( ellaandotto.com), offers the following advice: "One improvement that has made a huge difference is giving each child their own hook and storage box.
Students will receive complex and thorough assessment of their work, advice for improvement, editing notes, and a detailed plan of areas on which to concentrate during their period of self-reliance.
Of course, if China itself had been consistent in following Mr Hu's advice, the improvement in relations between India and Vietnam might not have such an impetus behind it, and, viewed from Beijing, might seem far less sinister.
