VG conducted data analysis and interpretation, in addition to primarily drafting the paper and addressing revisions.
There were some concerns that the authors should address in revision.
Below, I summarize the main discussion points raised during the review process that we would like you to address upon revision.
Essential revisions: Detailed reviewers' comments are included below, but the consensus among the reviewers was there are at least two major points we would like you to address upon revision.
On Sunday, Mr. McCain's speechwriter, Mark Salter, began drafting the address, and revisions continued until an hour before the speech.
The peer reviewers were also asked to comment on balance and fairness and any comments they provided back were addressed in revision".
This matter should be addressed in revision.
There are several concerns that must be addressed in revision before publication in eLife.
Here are the most important points that should be addressed upon revision.
General assessment and substantive concerns to be addressed during revision: 1.
