The phrase "addition to the revision" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to something that is being added or included as part of a revision process or document.
Example: "In addition to the revision, we will also incorporate feedback from the last meeting."
Alternatives: "supplement to the revision" or "update to the revision".
In addition to the revisions in response to the reviewers' comments, we would also like to propose the following additional changes to the manuscript, if you agree with it.
In addition to the design revision, a "benefits" or efficacy card was added in response to feedback, and infection risk was incorporated into the side effects card.
In addition to the internal revision number provided by the auditing system, models contain a user defined version number which can be set by administrators.
In addition to the 5 revisions done for recurrent dislocation, 14 other patients (8%) had 1 or more hip dislocations; all of these were treated nonoperatively.
Reasons for failure, in addition to the 4 septic revisions (3 complete revisions and one cup revision), are speculative and probably multifactorial.
The nonpartisan election idea was a surprise addition to the latest charter revision agenda.
These two questions were added after Study 1 and before Study 2. In addition to the three major revisions above, two of which directly addressed the weaknesses identified by Abraham et al. (2009), the tutorial version included a large number of smaller changes, which may have contributed to findings discussed in this paper.
In addition to this revision, Shin (1994) presented each of these two systems as a standard formal representation system equipped with its own syntax and semantics.
In addition to the three hips needing repeat revision, another two cups were considered radiographically loose.
In addition to these revisions mentioned, one early re-operation after a primary THA was necessary due to a suspected infection.
