The phrase "addition to the revised" is not correct as it is incomplete and lacks clarity.
It can be used when referring to something that is being added to a revised document or version, but it needs to be part of a complete sentence for proper usage.
Example: "In addition to the revised report, we have included new data for your review."
Alternatives: "supplement to the revised" or "update to the revised".
"In addition to the revised financing arrangements, the previously announced asset disposal programme and the sale of Thomas Cook India, the group is exploring a possible sale and leaseback of certain aircraft".
In addition to the revised gardens already in place, I created a new flower bed filled with what I call my "Dr. Seuss" flowers (giant purple Alliums) interspersed with lilies in all different colors.
These new results are by far the most significant addition to the revised version, and the accompanying narrative text is now added to the manuscript as part of the extended Figure 9 and supplement.
All of the diagnostic criteria, in addition to the recently revised American College of Rheumatology classification recommends use of labial minor salivary gland (MSG) biopsy exhibiting focal lymphocytic infiltrate for diagnosis of SS [ 4, 5].
Mr. Waxman added that in addition to the demand for the revised Moosewood books, there is also a steady market for the out-of-print original, with none of the fat or salt removed.
In addition to the risks of putting the revised peace deal before voters with Santos' approval rating at only 29%, another plebiscite would take months to stage because of the time required to pass enabling laws.
and logistic regression (in addition to the above - opportunely revised for logistic models - Hosmer-Lemeshow test for the goodness of fit, area under the Roc curve for the predictive power).
In addition to revising the text extensively, and simplifying and revising the "Laws" and "Commandments," they have added explicit "Translation" rules to ease translation of Scheme functions into relations.
KK made contribution to the acquisition of data in addition to revising the content of the paper.
In addition to a revised bid from the Dutch exotic sports-car maker Spyker Cars, the Luxembourg-based buyout firm Genii Capital submitted an offer in cooperation with Mr. Ecclestone, the firm said in a statement.
KT has made substantial intellectual contributions to the conception, design, analysis and interpretation of the data in addition to revising the manuscript for intellectual content and has given final approval of the version to be published.
