The phrase "addition to the commentary" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to supplementary information or remarks that enhance or clarify the main commentary.
Example: "In addition to the commentary, the author provided several footnotes to elaborate on key points."
Alternatives: "supplement to the commentary" or "contribution to the commentary".
In addition to the commentary, the Eureka! disc has a number of impressive extras: a BBC documentary on the film made by Paul Cronin; an interview with the non-professional actor Harold Blankenship, who plays the boy from West Virginia; and a demonstration of the cameras used by Wexler in the film.
The DVD release included an audio commentary recorded by Doremus, Guleserian and editor Jonathan Alberts, while the Blu-ray included deleted and alternate scenes in addition to the commentary.
In addition to the commentaries on 5 Live Sports Extra, Colin Murray keeps order in a Fighting Talk American themed special on Radio 5 Live at 11am on Saturday 22 October.
In addition to the public commentary, the Names Council recommended to the Board that they reject the proposal; likewise, a staff member urged caution.
The Economist should avoid such subtle, but corrosive, sexist remarks, in addition to the more blatant commentary on female leaders' physical attributes.Amy WarrenSt.
However, the latest addition to the BBC's F1 commentary team, Allan McNish, a former grand prix driver for Toyota who has won the Le Mans 24 Hours twice and is a long-standing Audi factory driver who will compete in their battle for the World Endurance Championship this year, points out that race simulation is a serious business.
In addition to the cruel and harsh commentary, my background and personal information were brought into the fold, I was inundated with hate mail (everywhere I turned, every social site you can think of, plus my personal email account) and my family and I were threatened.
In addition to the translations of and commentaries on the Platonic dialogues and the works of Plotinus published by Marsilio Ficino, Patrizi's knowledge of Greek gave him access to a body of writings from other relevant authors.
As Schultz explains, there are, in addition to the photographs and the critical commentary they have generated, two main sources of information for those hoping to crack the case: Patricia Bosworth's persuasive biography (loathed by the notoriously touchy Arbus estate) and the estate-sanctioned A Chronology.
In addition to the video and play-by-play commentary, the site will provide real-time game statistics, chats and live polling, as well as a pregame show.
The DVD was released on December 12, 2006 and has, in addition to the film, the following extras: Audio commentary from Frankel, editor Mark Livolsi, Field, screenwriter Aline Brosh McKenna, producer Wendy Finerman and cinematographer Florian Ballhaus.
