The phrase "added that the revised" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to someone who has provided additional information or clarification about a revised document or statement.
Example: "The manager added that the revised proposal would be submitted by the end of the week."
Alternatives: "stated that the updated" or "mentioned that the amended".
He added that the revised rules would explicitly give the bishops such power through a clause that said, "At all times, the diocesan bishop has the executive power of governance through an administrative act to remove the offending cleric from office, or to remove or restrict his faculties, and to limit his exercise of priestly ministry".
Mr Colville added that the revised penal code "may encourage further violence and discrimination against women" due to "deeply entrenched" stereotypes.
The firm also ratcheted up its 2009 forecast to $56 a barrel, from $46 a barrel but less out of bullish sentiment than to reflect higher-than-expected prices thus far, analyst J. Marshall Adkins said, adding that the revised 2009 numbers reflect the reality that a bottoming economy will likely propel oil prices while still acknowledging that inventory levels remain high.
Mosseri writes now that Instagram began "a comprehensive review last week" with a focus on "supporting young people", adding that the revised approach entails reviewing content policies, investing in technology to "better identify sensitive images at scale" and applying measures to make such content "less discoverable".
He added that the Department of Justice had revised its guidelines since the appeal court came to its opinion – and he hoped that would influence what the prosecution in the Sterling case did next.
He added that the airline could revise its application until June 28, the government deadline for any carrier that wants to file for a loan guarantee.
Mr. Macgillivray added, "That's why, when we were revising our privacy policy, we toyed with the idea of calling it our 'public policy.' " He said the company would have done so but California law required that it have a "privacy policy" labeled as such.
He added that the clinic planned to revise the guide this fall to include a discussion of these conflicts.
He added that the handbook had since been revised and no longer included that example because it "does not meet our operational requirements or privacy standards," which "expressly prohibit reporting on individuals' First Amendment activities".
The Met said it had fully cooperated with the district attorney's investigation and added that the museum will "review and revise" its acquisitions process.
He added that the department intended to review a revised business plan from Fisker and determine the best plan of action for the company to "meet its benchmarks, produce cars and employ workers here in America".
