The phrase "adaptation of the draft" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to changes or modifications made to a preliminary version of a document or proposal.
Example: "The adaptation of the draft was necessary to address the feedback received from the committee."
Alternatives: "revision of the draft" or "modification of the draft".
This exercise guided local cultural adaptation of the questionnaires, and led to a final draft.
Less visible, but still influential, was the new ordinal which provided for Protestant pastors rather than Catholic priests, an admittedly conservative adaptation of Bucer's draft; its Preface explicitly mentions the historic succession but it has been described as "... another case of Cranmer's opportunist adoption of medieval forms for new purposes".
RS was involved in the development of the protocol, the adaptation of the quality assessment tool, the statistical analysis and commented on the draft.
This process facilitated the selection of relevant questions, adaptation of the language to reflect regional idiom, and informed the structure and content of the draft questionnaire to be tested in the field.
Alison Carey, who comes from Storrs, founded Cornerstone with Mr. Rauch and wrote the adaptation of Brecht, several drafts' worth, each evolving from workshops "in neighborhood sites," Mr. Rauch said.
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HS helped to revise the draft and reorder the sequence of the draft.
Stastny was draft-eligible in the 2004 NHL Entry Draft, but opted out of the draft.
EA contributed to the conception and design of the study, contributed to the design and adaptation of the neuromuscular training program, was responsible for acquisition, analysis and interpretation of data, drafted and critically revised the manuscript.
AM participated in study design, translation and adaptation of the questionnaire, carried out data collection and data entry, participated in the analysis and wrote the final draft of the manuscript.
