Center the telling on an action full of emotion.
As was an awful lot of explanatory detail and very little action or depth of emotion.
Jarvis was found at a train station by the casting director; she had never acted before, and, for all the capable action and simulation of emotion she delivers, she's even better in repose.
When you write about this character describe them in terms of actions instead of emotions.
And so, paradoxically, by maintaining its tight Aristotelian grip on its single theme, the Iliad manages to suggest the whole range of human action and emotion — of an existence that, unlike that of the gods, has meaning precisely because we, like Achilles, know it will end.
Certainly Gilbert's examples show that actions and expressions of emotion often function as a way to convince an audience of a particular point of view.
Your sense of time drops away, you cease to see actors and see only people, you enter a fully imagined realm in which every detail of emotion, action and language is perfectly aligned.
Bobby learns that the ways of the heart and the ways of the world are two different things, and that dividing himself — separating the public persona and the private soul, the field of action from the realm of emotion — is the first step to success.
Keith Phipps of The A.V. Club gave the film a 'B+' grade, and asserted that it was "a reconsideration of what constitutes Star Trek, one that deemphasizes heady concepts and plainly stated humanist virtues in favor of breathless action punctuated by bursts of emotion.
"Adam and Eve," "Jacob and Esau and Davidid and Goliath" represent especially well Ghiberti's new, almost cinematic fusion of action, emotion and narrative.
