The phrase "achieved it would make" is not correct in English as it lacks clarity and proper structure.
It could be used in a context where you are discussing the outcome of achieving something, but it needs rephrasing for better understanding.
Example: "If the project is achieved, it would make a significant impact on our community."
Alternatives: "if accomplished, it would result in" or "if successful, it would create".
Evidently the 22-year-old artist who achieved it would one day do more than make devastating jottings on the back of an invitation card to his first one-man show.
Take some time to interrogate your goal; why you want to achieve it, how it would make you feel, what doors it would open up, why it must happen now and why this is essential to your happiness.
"Throughout 2004 and 2005 it appears that senior members of the armed forces reached the view that little more could be achieved [in Iraq] … and it would make more sense to concentrate on Afghanistan".
Instead of switching from Procedure A to Procedure B to achieve a FAR as low as.02, it would make more sense to stick with Procedure A and to induce more conservative responding.
Achieving military victory would make it more difficult for the government to prosecute him and other paramilitary leaders for war crimes if the conflict comes to an end.
Here in 2003 Serena Williams completed four slams in succession, the so-called "Serena slam", so the "Roger slam" is a possibility at Roland Garros this June which, if achieved, would make Federer only the sixth man to win all four majors.
Kinsley's agenda here seems to be taking shots at the freedom of religious belief and turning a blind eye to the good results that are achieved, as they would make a mockery of his views.
Over the past 12 months, Swift has achieved feats that would make even the most renowned pop stars green with envy.
Once you've completed this exercise for each role, choose the top 10 goals, which when achieved, would make this your best year yet.
Muktanada's question - "Are there limits to free speech?" has also been answered, by Rodrigo Baggio of the Comittee for democracy in information technology Next question to be answered is this from mchammered: "What do you think you can actually achieve that would make the world a better place?
