The phrase "a version that began" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to a specific iteration or adaptation of something that originated at a certain point in time.
Example: "This is a version that began as a simple concept but evolved into a complex project over the years."
Alternatives: "an iteration that started" or "a form that originated".
At the Concert for George, held at London's Royal Albert Hall on 29 November 2002, he and Eric Clapton performed a version that begins with McCartney alone, on ukulele, and then reverts to the familiar, rock arrangement, with Clapton taking over as lead singer and backing from Starr, Preston and others.
The report on Iraq that was presented there, while scarcely a glowing assessment, was noticeably rosier than a draft version that began to circulate last week, which found that Iraq had fallen short on 13 of the 18 standards for progress, partly meeting two.
Having developed it at Berkeley Repertory Theater and played it on Broadway, Fisher now has a filmed version that began airing on HBO this week.
After the company received hundreds of complaints that the commercial, introduced in early fall, was too racy, the Chrysler Group agency, PentaMark Worldwide in Troy, Mich., part of the BBDO Worldwide division of the Omnicom Group, revised it, producing a second, toned-down version that began running on Nov. 19.
"Rules of Deception" is the rare version that begins in by-the-numbers fashion, promising not much, but furiously picks up steam as it goes.
The "Comedy" in its entirety was not put into English till the end of the 18th century, when Henry Francis Cary, a librarian at the British Museum, began a version that was eventually published between 1805 and 1814, and which still stands as a classic of its kind.Like every translator since, Cary had choices to make.
In Sunday's Automobiles section, Lawrence Ulrich drives the 2012 Buick Regal GS, the sportiest version of a sedan that began life as a European corporate relation, the Opel Insignia.Mr.
This is the authorized version of a career that began in the nineteen-forties, and it includes some of the wittiest and most popular images ever published.
This summer, "The Living Word 3" — the latest version in a series that began in 2001 — will rise to the highest point of the Morgan Library & Museum's glass atrium.
If anything, it is the most refined version of a car that began its journey a long time ago.
