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That, however, seems a trite message to emerge from such a welter of sound and fury.
Or is it just horrific, socially acceptable (and marketable) brutality with a trite message tacked on for the critics?
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An astute observer of consumer obsession, Mr. Tomlinson ultimately subordinates much of his clever writing to a tepid and trite political message: that American civic life is a fractured bowl that needs to be put back together right now.
This isn't a trite point.
It's a trite and predictable lesson from what is arguably this talented author's tritest and most predictable novel.
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