The phrase "a thoroughly revised" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when describing something that has been carefully and completely updated or modified, such as a document, book, or plan.
Example: "The report was submitted as a thoroughly revised version, incorporating all the feedback received from the committee."
Alternatives: "a completely updated" or "a fully edited".
A thoroughly revised version fared somewhat better in subsequent stagings.
"Molecular Biology, Third Edition, provides a thoroughly revised, invaluable resource for college and university students in the life sciences, medicine and related fields.
A thoroughly revised and updated edition of the leading textbook on government and business policy, presenting the key principles underlying sound regulatory and antitrust policy.
He received a Guggenheim grant that year to fund the writing of a thoroughly revised and enhanced edition of his first MoMA catalog, now titled The History of Photography from 1839 to the Present Day (1949).
Handsome, well-researched, substantial tomes thudded on to the shelves: a thoroughly revised edition of William Curtis's Le Corbusier: Ideas and Forms (Phaidon), and two magnificent catalogues, The World of Charles and Ray Eames and Latin America in Construction (both Thames & Hudson), which accompanied exhibitions of the same name at the Barbican in London and MoMA in New York.
The accompanying CD-ROM contains powerful tools for helping students master chemical process design, including a thoroughly revised version of CAPCOST for evaluating fixed capital investments and full process economics; HENSAD for planning temperatures and heat exchange; a virtual plant tour of a simple chemical process; and additional student design projects.
In a statement Thomas Cook said: "The systems in place in 2006, which were intended to prevent such a tragedy, have since been thoroughly revised and address the criticisms made by the jury".
A Thomas Cook spokesman said: "The systems which were in place in 2006, which were intended to prevent such a tragedy, have since been thoroughly revised and address the criticisms made by the jury".
It is certain that some songs from tick would have been cut or thoroughly revised by an older, post-Rent Larson.
This new edition is thoroughly revised and features a new preface by Morfydd Owen.
This expanded, updated, and thoroughly revised second edition includes a new chapter on labor-market discrimination; quantitative examples; data and programming files enabling users to replicate key results of the literature; exercises at the end of each chapter; and expanded technical appendixes.
