The phrase "a thorough revision and" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing the process of reviewing and improving a document or piece of work, often in an academic or professional context.
Example: "The final report will include a thorough revision and an analysis of the data collected during the study."
Alternatives: "a comprehensive review and" or "an extensive edit and".
A two-year study by a special committee recommended a thorough revision, and in 1937 the council gave its authorization to the proposal.
All waste water was collected for four consecutive working days, initially at ordinary operating conditions and a second time after a thorough revision and cleaning of the discharge system.
The edition needs a thorough revision, and the original papyri need to be checked and re-edited.
We are thankful to Vladimir Filonenko for a thorough revision and editing of the original English version of the manuscript.
A notable exception is the recent work in Mozambique where an electronic reporting system, with a thorough revision of coding and certification practices, greatly improved the quality of cause of death data from hospitals [ 6].
The resumption of Nato supply convoys is also anticipated, although the report called for a "thorough revision of the terms and conditions of the arrangement" and would be subject to "taxes and other charges".
He then undertook a thorough revision of Russian books and rituals in accord with their Greek models, which he believed were more authentic, to bring them into line with the rest of the Orthodox church.
However, ten years after its publication, a critical review is urgently needed as well as a thorough revision of its taxonomy and its formal ontology.
In his latest arachnid study, Shultz [ 22] offered a thorough revision of arachnid morphology and employed the species exemplar approach for coding characters, i.e. reflecting taxon polymorphism.
We thank Carlos Gancedo for a thorough revision of the manuscript and Cecile Brocard (University of Vienna) for kindly providing yeast strains.
The new finding adds to our understanding of the morphology of this taxon and invites a thorough revision of the phylogeny of Macrobaenidae, Sinemydidae, and closely allied forms.
