Sentence examples for a substantive revision of from inspiring English sources

Because of its inexpediency, a substantive revision of the electoral law in time for the 2013 elections seems unlikely — despite the fact that a solid majority of Lebanese say they would prefer proportional representation to the current system.

If monitoring and evaluation capacity development is recognized as an important part of the role and contribution of the UN development system at the country level, this may require a substantive revision of the Common Country Assessment/ United Nations Development Assistance Frameworkguidance issued by the UNDG Working Group on Programming Issues with DOCO support.

The full review process has reinforced the need for a substantive revision to the conclusions (and perhaps also some adjustment of the Introduction) prior to acceptance in eLife.

"It is very challenging if you want to do a substantive revision to it".

Give yourself sufficient time to do a substantive revision that clarifies any confusing logic or arguments.

JPH participated in the concept of the study and in substantive revision of the manuscript.

MAT participated in the design of the study, the analysis of the data and in substantive revision of the manuscript.

Put it through several stages of substantive revision and editing.

Some topics were discussed only in one round because experts' opinions were clear and none of them made any substantive revision on their original statements after they have read the responses of other participants.

JR provided substantive revisions and interpretation of results.

MW made substantive revisions to various drafts of this manuscript which was prepared for publication by TT.