The phrase "a striking message" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it to describe a message that is particularly impactful, memorable, or attention-grabbing.
Example: "The campaign delivered a striking message that resonated with the audience and sparked important conversations."
Alternatives: "an impactful message" or "a powerful message."
MAASTRICHT, THE NETHERLANDS — The European Fine Art Fair, which closes Sunday, delivers a striking message.
And that's a striking message from another member of the White House team.
The girl who was reared elsewhere for her own safety returned to her roots and ousted the ossified political old guard with a striking message: "Compton is this amazing place with a rich history.
LONDON — Jeremy Corbyn's stunning transformation from perennial leftist rebel to leader of Britain's Labour Party upended British politics Saturday and delivered a striking message worldwide: At this anti-establishment moment, parties of the left are just as vulnerable to populist takeovers as parties of the right.
WASHINGTON — Senate leaders said they had reached an agreement late on Monday to approve new sanctions against Russia for interfering in the 2016 presidential election and for the country's conduct in Ukraine and Syria, delivering a striking message to a foreign power that continues to shadow President Trump.
One of the readings in the Hebrew Bible associated with this season of reflection and seeking to make amends is from the Book of Hosea: "Take with you words and turn to the Lord [YHVH] Say:... let the offerings of our lips be accepted for sacrificial calves" What a striking message!
That one person who first jeered, the most brave of the supposed slaves of the Ceausescu-regime, started a revolution with shout and gave freedom to a whole nation, is the striking message to all of us, proof of our power to change the world.
The most striking message came 20 minutes after the final buzzer, from the Nets' chief executive, Brett Yormark, who wrote on Twitter: "Nets fans deserved better today.
As I stood before it, I saw that it is in this material that the building's most striking message is written.
The most striking message that emerged was that users trusted the safety, confidentiality and privacy in health facilities at the time of childbirth.
Perhaps the most striking message of this review, though, is that there is no magic bullet in improving quality in healthcare.
