The phrase "a striking commentary" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used to describe a remark or observation that is particularly impactful or thought-provoking.
Example: "The author provides a striking commentary on the social issues of our time, challenging readers to reflect on their own beliefs."
Alternatives: "a powerful observation" or "an impactful remark."
It is a striking commentary on the nation's altered state that news of an airplane accident could come as somewhat of a relief.
A striking commentary New York Times Marching orders reaffirmed New York City, a shining symbol of the prosperity and social triumph that thugs like Osama bin Laden despise, is...on pins and needles.
The result is both entertaining visual trickery, and a striking commentary on the dual identities of famous DJs who come to life at night. .
The video takes place in a world populated by clowns ― actor Michael Rapaport among them ― but offers a striking commentary on the current president and police brutality.
IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN NIKE'S EQUALITY AD The striking commentary on equality on and off the court is worth the watch.
"Man as Object: Reversing the Gaze" is filled with men stripped naked -- both literally and figuratively; collectively, this body of work exposes women's sometimes cheeky (no pun not intended), provocative and striking commentaries on the opposite sex.
Al Jean bears a striking resemblance to the boy who eats worms, on the commentary track he explains that he used to eat worms as a child and this was a joke Mike Reiss had put in.
Among his early associates, David Bomberg developed from the Cubist idiom in 1912 13 images of a striking clarity and force, and William Roberts combined a Cubist formulation with social commentary analogous to that of the 18th-century painter William Hogarth.
And in "Mona," which cloaks itself in layers of ersatz textual commentary, a Cuban exile in New York falls into the clutches of a femme fatale who bears a striking resemblance to a familiar Italian Renaissance portrait.
This is a striking innovation.
