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The phrase "a second version on" is not correct in standard written English.
It is typically used when referring to an alternative or updated iteration of something, but the preposition "on" is not appropriate in this context.
Example: "The author released a second version of the book to address the feedback from readers."
Alternatives: "a second version of" or "an alternative version of".
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Bach performed a second version on Good Friday a year later, 30 March 1725.
It also received six Emmy nominations and spawned a second version, on ABC.
There's also a second version on the Chrome web store that lets you see the effects, but doesn't share your cookies you know, if you're chicken.
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And the government plans to release a second version of rules based on public comments it receives through 10 January.
The second case study, on [19], presented an evaluation of those first steps on a second version of the approach with partial tool support.
A first version of the AMS was flown on the NASA space shuttle Discovery in June 1998.
"We should aim to have a first version of the final agreement ready on Wednesday".
In a second version, the Toe Hang, you hold on upside down by your toes alone.
The acoustic studio version that appeared on Maybe This Christmas Too? differed from the soundtrack version as well as a third version appearing on the band's 2004 studio album Barenaked for the Holidays.
It starts from a first version based just on regulations and standard codes (version 0), then it integrates internal knowledge through the bowtie paradigm (version 1).
There is also a fourth version titled "Vengeance on the World" that plays in Crisis Core.
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