The phrase "a revision on" is not commonly used in written English; the more standard expression is "a revision of." You can use it when discussing changes or updates made to a document, plan, or piece of work, but it's better to use "revision of" for clarity.
Example: "The author submitted a revision on the manuscript, incorporating feedback from the editor."
Alternatives: "a revision of" or "an update to".
Submit a rough draft to the professor for comments, then a revision on the due date.
Aim of the paper was to make a revision on the bone microstructure adaptive mechanisms and function around dental implants and biomaterials.
The Bloomberg poll forecasts that a revision on Thursday in the second-quarter productivity report will show labor costs rising 1.6percentt, annualized, after the preliminary 2.1percentt announced last month.
This study investigated sex differences in spatial memory using a human analogue of the Radial Arm Maze: a revision on the Nine Box Maze originally developed by Abrahams, Pickering, Polkey, and Morris (1997) called the 17-Box Maze Test herein.
Thirteen years ago, concluding a revision on studies concerning the alterations of peripheral (platelets, vessels) serotonergic parameters in migraine patients I stated, "Why conduct any more research in the periphery?" [1].
A revision on May 25 began in the same way, but said she is "well known among tennis fans for her gigantic bazooms".
Agreement is possible on new government-subsidized terrorism insurance, on a revision of bankruptcy law and on clearing away at least some of a backlog of nominations, aides said.
The bishops were asked, for instance, to express their desires on a revision of the laws governing fasting and abstinence.
This involves a revision of a theory on instability at the boundary of lighter and denser fluids, known as the Rayleigh-Taylor principle.
"He influenced the entire region," said Jacqueline Friedrich, a wine writer who is working on a revision of her 1996 book, "A Wine and Food Guide to the Loire".
