The phrase "a revised template" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to a modified or updated version of a template that has been improved or changed in some way.
Example: "Please use a revised template for the project proposal to ensure all the latest guidelines are followed."
Alternatives: "an updated template" or "a modified template".
Most of the PAs using the revised template included a photograph of the particular health product along with a short caption (typically the name of the product).
PAs using the revised template showed a significant improvement, with the overall average increasing by 18 percentage points (p < 0.001) and shifting towards the high end of the adequacy scale, at 69%%.
The revised template shifted from a media-based "press release" format to a patient-directed "question answer" style format and included the use of prioritized message order, boxed text, visual cues, and key bullets.
The readability test results for PAs remained at a grade 13 15 level (i.e., requiring a college or university education to understand) after implementation of the revised template.
PAs written using the revised template also scored adequately, at 69%%.
The results in Fig. 2 show the average SAM score for PAs using the original or revised template.
The "Layout and Typography" category experienced the greatest increase, as the revised template focused mainly on format elements such as font, layout, subheadings, and "chunking".
Individual categories in the SAM test were analyzed and, as seen in Fig. 3, significantly improved when the revised template was used.
30 Only one of the European public assessment reports included in our sample (the one on ticagrelor) had been prepared before the revised template became effective.
Implementation of a revised PA template reduced the health literacy burden of Health Canada's PAs as measured by SAM tests; however, the revisions did not improve readability.
