The phrase "a revised proposal of" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to an updated or modified version of a proposal, typically in a formal or professional context.
Example: "We are pleased to present a revised proposal of our project plan for your review."
Alternatives: "an updated proposal for" or "a modified proposal regarding".
Now AG Barr confirmed that its potential partner had rejected a new - and better - bid: [Barr] made a revised proposal to the board of Britvic for an all share merger of the two companies.
One of those steps was when Heckscher officials submitted to the state a revised proposal for how they would use some of the proceeds of the proposed sale of the Grosz painting.
Arum said Pacquiao's manager Michael Koncz is in the process of delivering a revised proposal for a potential July fight to the 38-year-old fighter, who wants to fight "as soon as possible".
Stung by criticism, Gov. George E. Pataki is sending a revised proposal to make possible a $1.4 billion expansion of the Jacob K. Javits Convention Center only weeks after he submitted his original bill to the Legislature.
For the thesis course, students are required to submit a revised proposal (an update of the 410.800 proposal) for review and approval by the faculty adviser and biotechnology program committee one month prior to the beginning of the term.
For the thesis course, students are required to submit a revised proposal (an update of the 410.802 proposal) for review and approval by the faculty adviser and biotechnology program committee one month prior to the beginning of the term.
He said he was hoping for rapid approval of a revised proposal that would make demolition of buildings 75 years old or older subject to the city Landmarks Preservation Board's review.
"The problem is when we rush to judgment". The meeting was adjourned until 4 p.m. Dec. 11, when the council will convene at its new chambers near Newport Center to consider a revised proposal based on some of Wednesday night's comments.
Mr Bridgen has now tabled a revised proposal calling for a review of the "appropriate" sanctions for non-payment of TV licences.
But at a hearing on Thursday in San Francisco federal court, Seeborg was much less critical of a revised proposal and promised a ruling "very shortly".
