The phrase "a revised offer of" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to an updated or modified proposal or offer in a formal or business context.
Example: "We are pleased to present a revised offer of employment that includes additional benefits and a higher salary."
Alternatives: "an updated proposal of" or "a modified offer of".
Last week, Williams unveiled a revised offer of $44 a share.
Its latest statement said the consortium, which includes a Canadian investment house, Borealis Infrastructure Management, and GIC Special Investments of Singapore, made a revised offer of £8.10 ($15.25) a share.
NFO Worldwide Inc., the world's No. 3 custom market research company, agreed to a revised offer of $611 million from the Interpublic Group of Companies after rejecting a higher, unsolicited cash bid from an undisclosed bidder.
Severn Trent had rejected a revised offer of £22, or $34.15, a share, which valued the utility at about $8.2 billion, saying it failed to reflect the utility's long-term value or future potential.
In Istanbul, the lead Western negotiator, Catherine Ashton, said only that her Iranian counterpart, Saeed Jalili, had refused to engage on the details of a revised offer to swap most of Iran's low-enriched uranium for fuel rods, to power a declining Tehran reactor that produces medical isotopes.
According to The Sunday Times, |ITV chief executive Charles Allen will keep his £2m a-year salary if shareholders reject a revised offer for 48% of the company from Goldman Sachs, Blackstone and Apax and they in turn abandon the bid.
In the other, the state-run China Minmetals Corporation submitted a revised offer for Oz Minerals, excluding some of that company's key assets after Australian authorities on Friday rejected its original bid on security grounds.
Also Tuesday, the state-run China Minmetals submitted a revised offer for Oz Minerals, excluding some of Oz's important assets after the Australian authorities rejected its original bid Friday on security grounds.
After 23 hours of talks over two days, the league gave a revised offer to the players union, then said it was done negotiating.
But after a disappointing response the E.U. made a revised offer, cutting back some of the coverage.
Last month, Brookfield Properties, one of the five bidders, declined to submit a revised offer and essentially dropped out of the bidding.
