The phrase "a revised draft of the document" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to an updated version of a document that has been edited or modified.
Example: "After receiving feedback from the team, I have prepared a revised draft of the document for your review."
Alternatives: "an updated version of the document" or "a modified draft of the document."
-What do "we" wish to see made clear in a revised draft of the compromise?
Most of the Turkish wrath has been directed at Cem Özdemir, the Green party's co-chair, whose parents are Turkish immigrants and who was instrumental in bringing a revised draft of the resolution to the Bundestag.
He gave officials with the New York State Department of Environmental Conservation until June 1 to publish "a revised draft" of the standards and accept public comment "for a period of not less than 30 days".
Staying with sports, a revised draft of the Indian Olympic Association IOAA) constitution suggests that people facing corruption charges will not be able to hold any official posts in the body, the CNN-IBN website reports.
A revised draft of the university's sex assault policy reviewed by VICE says that "individual, highly-trained, trauma-informed investigators" will now handle all sex assault complaints against students, staff, and faculty.
We sent a revised draft of the DCI to seven more experts for content review.
An expert panel with 47 participants was convened that provided electronic feedback on a revised draft of the checklist.
As a further effort to ensure interpretive validity [ 17], a revised draft of the analysis was developed and distributed to all six focus group participants for their review.
A revised draft of the environmental impact statement should be ready by summer 2011 and will be open for 45 days for public comment, with the final review expected by October.
BAGHDAD — Iraqi negotiators are reviewing a revised draft of a long-delayed security agreement to govern the conduct of American forces in Iraq, an Iraqi government spokesman announced Wednesday.
Henson continued to pursue Bowie for the role of Jareth, and sent him each revised draft of the film's script for his comments.
