"a revised draft of" is a correct and commonly used phrase in written English.
It is typically used when referring to a document, paper, or written work that has been updated or edited. Example: I am currently working on a revised draft of my research paper, incorporating feedback from my professor. In this example, the writer is referring to a new version of their research paper that has been updated or improved based on feedback from their professor.
-What do "we" wish to see made clear in a revised draft of the compromise?
November 11, 2011 H&F council announces "next stage of consultation" into the supplementary planning document for the Earls Court Project - a revised draft of the document.
BAGHDAD — Iraqi negotiators are reviewing a revised draft of a long-delayed security agreement to govern the conduct of American forces in Iraq, an Iraqi government spokesman announced Wednesday.
Most of the Turkish wrath has been directed at Cem Özdemir, the Green party's co-chair, whose parents are Turkish immigrants and who was instrumental in bringing a revised draft of the resolution to the Bundestag.
He gave officials with the New York State Department of Environmental Conservation until June 1 to publish "a revised draft" of the standards and accept public comment "for a period of not less than 30 days".
The United Nations secretary general, Kofi Annan, gave a revised draft of his blueprint for reunifying Cyprus to negotiators from the Greek and Turkish sides of the island and said he would make the plan final tomorrow by exercising his mandate to fill in any blanks they could not resolve so the document could be submitted to an islandwide referendum vote on April 20.
After the United States presented a revised draft on Monday, the permanent members, who hold veto power, met twice today for discussions.
France plans to present delegations with a revised draft text of a possible climate agreement on Wednesday afternoon, despite doubts that negotiators would finish it on time.
The Ministry of Health MOHH; currently the National Health and Family Planning Commission) issued a revised draft in 2007, and the revision process is still ongoing [ 31].
Please try to address as many of these issues as possible in a revised draft.
He never really produces a first draft, a revised draft, a final draft or a copy in the antique sense".
