The phrase "a revised account" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to an updated or modified version of a report, story, or explanation.
Example: "After reviewing the initial findings, the researcher submitted a revised account of the experiment's results."
Alternatives: "an updated report" or "a modified version".
A revised account played down the possibility of an altercation.
A ministry spokeswoman, Phan Thuy Thanh, made the accusation in reaction to a revised account of the raid in Mr. Kerrey's new memoir, "When I Was a Young Man," in which Mr. Kerrey says he was aware that women and children had begun to gather as his squad searched Thanh Phong village for enemy Viet Cong in 1969.
But later, after a long and tangled consideration of the question of how it is possible for a deductive inference to be reflected in reality, he comes up with a revised account: 'Every inference is the ideal self-development of an object taken as real' (Principles, Terminal Essay I, p. 598).
A8 New Details on Warship Blast A significantly revised account of the deadly bombing of the destroyer Cole is emerging as one aspect of the investigation focuses on shipboard security, officials said.
In his 1904 Ethics of Pure Will, the second part of his System of Philosophy, he offers a significantly revised account of both.
However, recently the historical evidence has been reexamined and his interpretation been questioned by John Wippel and Hans Thijssen, the latter in the context of a substantially revised account of the juridical procedures against Giles of Rome.
Eight days after the attack on the Cole killed 17 sailors, this clearer and significantly revised account of the bombing is beginning to emerge, according to administration officials, Navy commanders and some of those aboard the Cole that day.
Harper noticed that Bartram's notes were considerably altered and expanded in the printed edition, and the detail of the white tail appeared in print for the first time in this revised account.
The result was that Barcelona lost 79 million euros instead of making a profit of 11 million euros, which Laporta claimed for his last season in charge, according to the revised accounts presented by Rosell and approved last month by the club's general assembly, which represents the interests of about 175,000 fee-paying fans who own Barcelona.
"In Durban all countries agreed revised accounting rules for these sectors.
The revised accounts and explanations were reviewed by the non-clinical co-chief investigator and then by an organisational psychologist who had not been involved in the earlier stages (stage 5).
