The phrase "a redaction" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to the process of editing or censoring text, often for legal or privacy reasons.
Example: "The document was submitted with a redaction of sensitive information to protect the identities of the individuals involved."
Alternatives: "an edit" or "a revision".
Milton's textbook is a redaction of Ramus's methods.
(Occasionally the author adds a terse footnote to a redaction he feels especially sore about).
According to this view, the Tetrateuch is a redaction primarily of three documents: the Yahwist, or J (after the German spelling of Yahweh); the Elohist, or E; and the Priestly code, or P.
A redaction oversight by the US government has finally confirmed that the Federal Bureau of Investigation's targeting of secure email service Lavabit was used specifically to spy on Edward Snowden.
To say that Cressida "lives happily ever after" is perhaps too harsh a redaction, but it does indicate the transmutation that occurs by the end of the novel's terse 200-odd pages.
Across central Brooklyn, where the posters were put up in subway stations, stores, and other public spaces, the forceful simplicity of "A Teenager with Promise" — the title is a redaction of the original headline, "A Teenager Who Was Grappling with Problems and Promise" — mobilized a rush of public pathos.
The clearest stance DeVos gave was a soft redaction of a much-mocked statement she made during a debate in January 2017, when she cited grizzly bears as a reason to arm public school personnel.
We then alerted the media after we found, amid the mostly redacted emails, an email that revealed Palin's [email protected] underneath a partial redaction because the highlighter used for blacking out the email addresses had dried up.
The F.B.I. sent my manuscript to various departments in the Bureau, and after a three-month review process there was not a single redaction.
943 preserves a full redaction of book II and fragments of the other three books of a commentary on the Sentences that Marchia may have composed outside Paris after studying there, so this could represent Marchia's early teaching, although it may also be connected with his Paris lectures themselves.
The shorter work on the continuum (Murdoch and Synan 1966, 212 288), consisting of a single quaestio, is an early redaction of the longer work, the Tractatus de indivisibilibus (Wood 1988).
