The phrase "a preliminary version which" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to an initial draft or early iteration of a document, report, or project that is subject to further revision or development.
Example: "The team submitted a preliminary version which outlines the main objectives of the project for review."
Alternatives: "an initial draft that" or "a draft version that".
Amazingly, that's also the substance of what Jacques Derrida wrote, at almost exactly the same time, in "Of Spirit" (which appeared in November , 1987 and of what Jean-Luc Godard was saying, at almost exactly the same time, in the first episode of "Histoire(s) du cinéma" (a preliminary version of which he showed at Cannes in May , 1988.
The proposed PA system, a preliminary version of which was presented in [15, 16], consists of three stages: beamforming-based signal separation, model-based likelihood calculations, and fusion of log-likelihood ratios over the set of beamformers.
A preliminary version of the report, which was provided to a House subcommittee on criminal justice and drug policy, originally had harsh words for Panama's law enforcement agencies, saying they were "corrupt and ill trained" and "overwhelmed" by drug traffickers.
On the other hand, McKinney et al. (2006) suggested a factor of 3.8 using a preliminary version of MCNPX 2.6.0, which supports the alpha particle transportation.
Five certified geriatricians performed a final review of the items from which a preliminary version of the GCT was produced, along with an instructional guide.
I.B.M., which has a preliminary version of its auction software on the market, is using work that the company had done on human gene analysis to develop software that will, eventually, search the Web for products with detailed specifications.
Richard demo'ed the new Search page, which is a preliminary version of the Advanced Search that will be available in the fall.
YouTube competitors like MySpace, DailyMotion and MSN's Soapbox have used video-fingerprinting technology developed by Audible Magic, a Los Gatos-based company, which debuted a preliminary version of its software in February.
The vignette, which appears in a preliminary version of the spot, shows a hearty singalong performed by several firefighters.
A preliminary version (9 items) of Bull-M, in which the order of all items was not that of the final instrument, was administered to 20 students (13 15 years old), to make sure that it was understandable and to evaluate response time.
