The phrase "a personal version" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to an individual's unique interpretation or adaptation of something, such as a story, recipe, or idea.
Example: "This is my personal version of the classic recipe, which includes some unique spices that I love."
Alternatives: "an individual interpretation" or "a customized edition".
Having won 14 World Championship titles, Taylor has turned the global darts game into a personal version of Monopoly.
So in addition to marching through cities around the country, I wonder if we can stage a personal version, an "Occupy Your Checkbook" movement.
Quip gives away a personal version of its software for free and sells a corporate version, which allows more managerial control, for $12 a person each month.
And in photographic self-portraits from the 1970s, the Cameroonian artist Samuel Fosso offers a personal version of internationalist couture that verges on intergalactic.
Whitehead begins by discussing how every New Yorker devises a personal version of the city: "You start building your private New York the first time you lay eyes on it...
Its current director, Sunder Katwala, speaks to me on the phone while exploring a personal version of work-life balance by trying to control his one-year old on his lap.
It is pared back, "bones and skin", in Binoche's words, yet palpably produced by someone with a lifetime's marination in the text (in 2012, she also published a more personal version of the play, called Antigonick).
Italian singer Mina made a very "personal" version of the song for her 1988's album Ridi Pagliaccio.
It seemed only fitting that Cecilia herself appear in the music video for "Cecilia And The Satellite," but when it came time to film her small part, McMahon realized he wanted a more personal version to supplement the official video.
It's in Danish, but with the pictures and Google Translate, you get a great, more personal version of Odense.
Handy's longitudinal self-study is a kind of personal version, strikingly triangulating their research findings with his individual and historical account.
