"a more precise description" is correct and usable in written English.
You could use it when providing more detail about something, or when referring to a detailed description more suited to the context. For example: "The textbook provided a general description of the process, but a more precise description was needed for my research."
For a more precise description of the wood surface community composition, we analysed the communities at the OTU level.
— Daniel Burns, Hyattsville, Md .I understand readers' frustration that we didn't provide a more precise description of the official.
But that's the style that I believe will eventually permit a more precise description of Santa Barbara terroirs.
Objective: To derive a more precise description of vocal fold vibration, experimental phonation of excised canine larynxes was studied.
The French title, "Les Amours Imaginaires," is a more precise description of this palpitating confection, a study of an unconsummated romantic triangle.
In nearly 20 years in journalism, in every case I've seen the word "ethnic" used, it's been a weak option compared to a more precise description.
3D Finite element analysis demonstrates that the AOP model can yield a more precise description of CSWs compared with the ECW model in MIDAS.
Knowledge of a coating occurrence, their structure and hydraulic properties is required for a more precise description of water flow and contaminant transport in soils.
A position weight matrix (PWM) offers a much more precise description of the binding preferences for a given transcription factor, but the total space of all possible PWMs across each subsequence of a genome cannot be completely explored in an efficient manner.
Whatever the reasons underlying the result in Fig. 1, it is clear that an indicator of mismatch based on direct measures of skills would provide a much more precise description of the phenomenon.
We now added a much more precise description of the dynamical implications of the model in the main text.
