The phrase "a more focused version" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to a refined or concentrated adaptation of something, such as a document, idea, or project.
Example: "After reviewing the feedback, I created a more focused version of the proposal to address the concerns raised."
Alternatives: "a more concentrated version" or "a more refined version."
You can hear a more focused version of that anger in the ferocious club tracks that launched Blanco as a rapper: "I pimp-slap you bitch niggas with my limp wrist, bro / What the fuck I gotta prove to a room full of dudes who ain't listening to my words cuz they staring at my shoes?" he snapped on his 2012 viral hit Wavvy.
Ann Temkin, the museum's chief curator of painting and sculpture and the coordinator of the Oldenburg exhibition — a more focused version of a show first seen at Vienna's museum of modern art — referred to "The Street" (1960), Mr. Oldenburg's first mature work, as "an absolute masterpiece".
There is also better search, more detailed statistics for individual photos and a redesigned interface that's had a lot of the crap scraped off of the interface to present you with a more focused version of Flickr on mobile.
For many students, graduate school is a more focused version of college.
It's not a circus trick, but has roots in other accepted practices like meditation, mindfulness, and CBT it's just a more focused version.
In many ways, it's a more focused version of the remittances that Mexican immigrants in the U.S. have been sending home for decades, trying to lift their loved ones in a homeland whose government has failed to fulfill basic obligations.
Fruehauf was so successful that he pulled together a powerful group of sponsors and last March launched Lab Central, a spiffier, more focused version of CBL.
Don't think 'what's in it for me?'" A slightly more focused version of the first value, but proactive.
Rolling Stone magazine's Alan Light praised Public Enemy's self-assured and realistic lyrics, and viewed the album as a deeper, more focused version of "the careening rage of Nation of Millions".
There were titans up for the job who didn't remain in the race for various reasons," he acknowledges when we meet again, this time at the London Coliseum – where I encounter a less discursive, more focused version of the man.
In Sunday's Automobiles section, Lawrence Ulrich reviews the 2013 Porsche Boxster, a slimmer, faster and more focused version of the sports car introduced by the German automaker 16 years ago.
