The phrase "a more appropriate description" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when discussing or suggesting a better or more fitting way to describe something.
Example: "After reviewing the data, I believe a more appropriate description of the results would be 'inconclusive' rather than 'negative.'"
Alternatives: "a better fitting description" or "a more suitable characterization."
"Groundswell" would have been a more appropriate description.
And, yes, coached appears to be a more appropriate description than watched.
Pearce was said to be "frustrated" but "exasperated" was probably a more appropriate description.
One male sleeps, or rests – if resting is a more appropriate description of what wool carder bees do at night – curled up in his 'cavity'cavity
The footnote in "Infinite Jest" labels the film as a "parody of neoconceptual structuralist films," and though "neoconceptual structuralist" means nothing to me, I could not come up with a more appropriate description for the short video of a man intensely observing two human-figurine candles.
By means of the recent HOSIM, a more appropriate description of the curvilinear high-permeability channels is obtained.
Second, since MTC is a theory of information without meaning (not in the sense of meaningless, but in the sense of not yet meaningful), and since we have seen that [information − meaning = data], "mathematical theory of data communication" is a far more appropriate description of this branch of probability theory than "information theory".
What more appropriate description could there be of New York, which boasts the biggest gap between the rich and poor of any state in the nation, than a tale of two cities? Mario Cuomo went on to use words that could be a direct indictment of his son's budget.
To me, anyway, bravery and heroism still seem more appropriate descriptions of such behavior.
Thus, future research is needed to test whether the same results would be found if more appropriate descriptions of social status were provided.
The use of a standard terminology provides a more appropriate method of expressing unambiguous, computable, and interoperable phenotype descriptions.
