The phrase "a message that makes" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when describing a message that has a significant impact or effect on the recipient.
Example: "The speaker delivered a message that makes people reflect on their choices and actions."
Alternatives: "a message that resonates" or "a message that influences".
Unfortunately for Mr Strauss-Kahn, his own country's voters may soon be sending a message that makes life harder, putting it mildly, for political union's keenest advocates.
More provocatively, she claimed that "… this focus on STEM [Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematics] subjects sends a message that makes her (and me) uncomfortable: doing a man's work is more impressive than doing a woman's".
Parsons' leapfrog of Pittman makes clear that AOL Time Warner needs a message that makes better sense of the merger.
At the same time, focus on undoing the kludge of MSN, MSN Live, Windows Live and the rest, and create a coherent whole with a message that makes sense.
"This does not mean you sell from the podium, rather that you develop a message that makes people want to learn more about your product or service". Think Dave Ramsey.
"We had to come up with a message that makes sense: different personalities of cars in the movie, just like you look for a car that fits your personality.
His complaint was met with a message that made him think Waymo believes it's on "a mission from God for the greater good".
They get a message that making the most money, having the coolest house and car, looking the prettiest, and being the smartest is what makes them valuable.
One of the most powerful moments after Pulse was hearing Orange County mayor Teresa Jacobs basically apologize for a message that made the world less safe for gay people.
The majority acted to "send a message that making lawful contributions is not a dishonorable thing to do and it's not a dishonorable thing to receive".
"But I do think this package is comprehensive thoughtful and fair and sends a message that making buildings and real estate green is not something that stands in the way of business owners and others' making money".
